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prenticebard
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Here's a little song I wrote today that I'd like to dedicate to Sherri DuPree. Of course this is probably really presumptious since I'm a newbie here and the girls of Eisley are such awesome songwriters themselves, but I'm not known for my great modesty anyways. I need to write some more verses, but here it is: (It does have a melody btw) *holds breath*

Moments Like This

Verse 1
On a morning like this
You think that you could be pure again
In a dawning like this
You dream the world could be bright again
But the shadows fall soon enough
To drown out the echoes of love
The glimpses you gained of heaven’s gate
Are distorted by this world of hate


Chorus
But it’s mornings like this
You’re living
It’s moments like this
You’re winning
It’s moments like this
You’re learning to fly
High above the dark oceans of pain
In a sky full of grace without shame
In moments like this


Bridge
So hold on
To your promise
Hold on
To your memories
Just hold on
To the blindness that leads you to truth
To the light that is growing in you
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lazerbith
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awww. aint you just so sweet. that was precious.
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Girlylikepixieflamethrow
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Sherri's amazing. And that was a nice thing to write for her.
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nevernever
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that's really sweet, and beautiful.
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pazatronix!
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aw. that's very nice. Smile
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whatupmyasian
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You should post yourself on Youtube performing this song.
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prenticebard
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whatupmyasian wrote:
You should post yourself on Youtube performing this song.


I'm afraid I can't sing very well. My mom is a great singer, though. Maybe I could teach it to her. Very Happy

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whatupmyasian
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prenticebard wrote:
whatupmyasian wrote:
You should post yourself on Youtube performing this song.


I'm afraid I can't sing very well. My mom is a great singer, though. Maybe I could teach it to her. Very Happy


Aww, c'mon. So a song you wrote dedicated to Sherri and it's sung by your mom? Hmm, If I were Sherri I wouldn't care if you didn't sing well. You should sing it. I'm not forcing you or anything Very Happy , but you definitley should. I wish I had a camera to use for Youtube. Crying or Very sad
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Really nice, seriously. And for Sherri too.

Please post someone singing it!

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ajijotak
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sherri would be happy to see you sing this song, i think.
dont worry about it, you'll be fine. Very Happy

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