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 Post subject: If this were a comedy, would you laugh?Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 12:55 pm 
This morning, I was downstairs getting clothes for the day and I came up with this really really funny idea for a comedy; it would be like (if you ever seen this before) desperate housewives meets arrested development... somehow it just sounds so much better... thought it would give you a more visual idea... since the shows being newer. Radio/T.V. Broadcasts: Hi, I'm stacy. I'm Chauntelle. And I'm sherri Radio personality: So... what brings you here to KTV radio rock station? Chauntelle: Well... us girls were thinking of inviting a bunch of our fans for a roadtrip down-town Tyler, Texas to hang with us and do some site seeing of all the places we hung out when we were kids. It would be a contest. Who ever puts their name in the mail with a letter supporting why they'd want to go, and is at random chosen, will fly down to Tyler, all expences paid.. by warner bros of course, would get to hang out with us for the week. Radio personality: That sounds like a great idea. who came up with this idea? The Band: Oh, we did. Sherri: SO... start sending your letters to Eisley Roomnoises at warner bros. at PO Box 123 Tyler Texas, 4543 and you might get the chance to win! The due date is May 21 Radio personality: Well, you heard it. And that is all for now, stay tune to Maroon 5 comming up next, followed by Gwen Stefani. A month later: "yo! MOM I WON I WON I WON" says Jimmy, contestant winner (*jumps up and down*) In next scene as follows: "Dude... " says Rob ... "Yeah man" says Jo "I won" says Rob "Won what?" says Jo "I won the contest to see Eisley, and... oh look, you did too.. say I didn't know you signed up?" Jo: "Uhm... yeah... I was bored" Two weeks later The boys are all rounded up to get into Stacy's fine mallibu, new and branspakin' hot. Stacy: "Uhm... that'll be five bucks" Boys: "huh?" Stacy: "You know.... for gas money" Boys: "oh...oh yeah here" they hand stacy five bucks meanwhile as they are driving around the block and into town Sherri is reading a book the whole entire time while Chauntelle is making nice conversation with the boys. Chauntelle: So what your names? Rob: Rob Jo: Jo Jimmy: Jimmy Chauntelle: Well that's nice. Well I hope you have a good day Boys: "uhm.. thanks..." ... Jimmy: Say.. we're back at your house are we going to take a tour inside? Sherri: Uhm... no. But do you mind if I give you a tour of what I'm reading? Boys: "Uhm... sure..." Sherri: "Ok! well so far, prince charming fought the bad guy beat the tar out his poor ol' sorry butt. Freed the princess, they kissed, and then ... Oh!and they lived happy ever after. The end. Oh will ya look at the time? Nice talking to you guys. I think that I had the best time talking to you....what's your name? " Rob: Rob Sherri: Oh yeah.. rob, rob, rob.. gotcha' well nice meeting you. You must realize they only went on the 'road trip' for ten minutes. Stacy: Bye. You can get out now Boys: but.. huh? Chauntelle: have a nice day (*waves daintly*) bye... Rob: "Uhm.. do we get our money back?" Stacy: "uhm.. .why?" Rob: "Well we only been gone for live ten minutes, that's totally bogus. Stacy: "No it's not. dude we were homeschooled. we're boring people. get over it. And sorry, no refunds" "ta ta... now leave, before you smell up my car... my air freshener's dying out" Rob: (*gives ticked off look*) Boys: (*gets out of car, leaves, turns around symotamiously*) Girls: (* waves like the queen and smiles pretty*) Drives off... stacy burns rubber... Stacy: Who wants to go to the brewtones club and jam to bright eyes? Sherri: Yeah! woooohooooooo ow! ya! Chauntelle: (* highfives Sherri*) The End _________________ I don't know if this is constitutional or well in simpliar words if I can do this.. but I'm gonna try. ok I LOVE EISLEY and... they love me.. hahaha ok don't ask. but yay three cheers for EISLEY and ALL that is HAPPY! |
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:08 pm
ha ha ha Sitcom Stacy, Chauntelle and Sherri rule. _________________ and iiiii can't live without you and i don't want to. i've done that all my life up til now. 
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:16 pm
um.....I think General forum is the place for this. _________________ curently awaiting:The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess |
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:29 pm
LOL hey that was awesome. As for this thread going under general. Well I think it's alright to post it up here. _________________ 
"Speak when you are angry - and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret" www.purevolume.com/247 |
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 1:01 am
Yeah this goes here. BTW, all you little Stacy fanboys, Chauntelle actually made conversation!! hahahahahahaha Stacy's cute, but Chauntelle's better!!! |
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:31 am
oversimplified(myband) wrote: um.....I think General forum is the place for this. who cares.... Great story. _________________ www.myspace.com/benjones www.xanga.com/benjones70 |
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 10:04 am
boring homeschoolers...tour of my book...haha, that was funny. GODBLESS -NiQ _________________ chinese food makes me sick |
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 12:21 pm
umm..don't really think so...it's kinda cheesy  _________________ 
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Joined: 05 Mar 2005 | Posts: 528 | Location: Hannover-Deutschland, Germany, Allemagne
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 12:29 pm
Quote: umm..don't really think so...it's kinda cheesy Nice attempt though. Maybe if I actually saw all of this being acted out, it might have been a little funnier. _________________ we're not sleeping and i'm not breathing |
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 2:33 pm
I liked two things about that. 1-Malibu Stacy 2-"symotamiously" JD _________________ "Well, hopefully that's our job, to strap rockets onto everything." - Adam Savage, Mythbusters |
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 4:43 pm
what does that have to do with Arrested Development and Desperate Housewives? _________________ G.O.B.: Oh, I missed you, Michael! Michael: All right. G.O.B.: Or should I say robot. Michael: What, cause'm not crying? G.O.B.: Maybe you don't have enough RAM to understand this, Michael, but there's such a thing as brotherly love. |
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